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#31 Post by Keryn O'Shea »

Seth wrote: Sat Nov 18, 2023 5:08 pmPerfect
Sweet, I'll have it done up, cheers 🍻

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#32 Post by Keryn O'Shea »

My son created this today as my other friend is over committed with his design work, what do you think?
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#33 Post by Bruce Weldy »

Looks perfect to me. Thanks for doing this.

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#34 Post by Bill Fitzmaurice »

I like it.

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#35 Post by Seth »

:thumbsup:
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#36 Post by Rich4349 »

Looks great, though a few minor bits:

Add a comma after On in the heading.

Make it "contributions", plural, and end that sentence with a period.

Add an Oxford comma after experience, though that is up to personal preference.

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#37 Post by Tom Smit »

Looks good.
Rich4349 has a few good points.
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#38 Post by Keryn O'Shea »

He tried to get a space in after the comma in the heading but couldn't, he'll try again tomorrow..
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#39 Post by AntonZ »

I think this is not entirely correct english:
your friends <snip> offer our sincere gratitude
as it mixes up third person ("your friends") and first person ("our").


One way to write it correctly could be:
your friends <snip> offer their sincere gratitude

Another way:
We, your friends at <snip>, offer our sincere gratitude

I apologize for being the resident grammar-freak-for-the-day (and not even a native speaker - double sorry :oops: ).

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#40 Post by AntonZ »

And I want to add that I like it very much. You got the tone just right.

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#41 Post by Keryn O'Shea »

Too easy, you're right Anton, we'll jump back on that tonight, and thank you.

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#42 Post by Bill Fitzmaurice »

When this is done post it as a new thread under the title Grant Bunter Memorial. After you post it I'll make it a Sticky. Then everyone can add their comment and it will remain at the top of the page.

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#43 Post by Keryn O'Shea »

Bill Fitzmaurice wrote: Wed Nov 22, 2023 8:24 am When this is done post it as a new thread under the title Grant Bunter Memorial. After you post it I'll make it a Sticky. Then everyone can add their comment and it will remain at the top of the page.
Ok, will do Bill.
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#44 Post by AntonZ »

Remove the comma after Billfitzmaurice.info then I say we are calling it done.

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#45 Post by Seth »

Well... since we're squeezing the ever living piss outta these two sentences... I would change the "but" in the second portion to "and". Also add a little to the end of it indicating perpetuity.

"Your absence will be felt and the generosity of your time, experience, and knowledge will go on to help others for many years to come."
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